Story of a loving Sister (TVD fanfiction/English)

The rights in characters and places from the TV series belong to the makers. The rights in my characters and in the story belong to me (apart from the story details from the TV series).
This story is the English version of my recently published story. I'm from Germany and learn English only in school, so be understanding. It would be nice if you tell me my most frequently mistake, so that I can improve my English skills and the story. I translated it all by myself and I tried my best so I hope you'll enjoy.
This is a FanFiction of 'The Vampire Diaries'. Who does not know the TV series including the 5th season, should be careful, because, unfortunately, spoilers cannot be avoided here. It's my first story on Wattpad. I would be glad about comments, votes and in general reads. You can also leave criticism or ideas.

After long time a young woman called Vivian visits her old hometown, Mystic Falls. There she meets not just old friends, but also family: Her sister who knows nothing about Vivian lives there and is constantly in supernatural difficulties. Vivian tries everything to be a good sister for her, but is she able to manage this also as a vampire?

I try to make regular updates, but especially in English it takes a while. Now I wish you a lot of fun while reading! :) ♥