BREACH (UNDERGOING RE-CONSTRUCTION)

BREACH (UNDERGOING RE-CONSTRUCTION)

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Rae Norman is a complex individual, in a futuristic world with far more difficult obstacles to overcome in order to escape, she must set herself out on a mission to do just that, escape. Being a genetic mutation, she has never felt quite right, and a terrible revelation has proved that she is unfitting to the otherwise "perfect" community. Thus, her small window of time to break-free, has finally come. She has the ability to control people's minds, though she doesn't know she can. She can move object's with just a simple thought command. she can destroy something the exact opposite of fragile. With this threat, no one is willing to risk her release, therefore she is held as a permanent hostage under cameras and lights, in a vast abundance of abliterating whiteness. Everyday, she is faced with new challenges and tested for strenths and weaknesses. They train her. They watch her. They hide her. They change her. The question is... Will she get out before they have the chance to kill her? This story simply sprouted from the bowels of my being, and I hope you amazing readers and writers find it to peak your interests. *PLEASE NOTE*I currently do not have a proper title or cover for this story, it is NOT an official story, it is not clarified to be continued. *THANK YOU FOR NOTING* I also unerstand that this story may be a bit like the Divergent series, but not by any means am I trying to copy Veronica Roth. *This story is officially on hold for a while, (I have no idea how much monger it will be), I am sorry to anyone who was interested it has just been like a paling paint to me compared to other writing in streets I have at the moment.*
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