Rewritten fantasy

This is an Eleceed fanfic where I write it in a Different manner to the original. I'm writing down what I feel like could've been the plot, because in my opinion it feels a little forced in some places. No disrespect to the author, but I want to express my own thoughts of what the plot could've been. Elected is not owned by me and is owned by Jeho son and ZHENA, go support their work.