Crown of Fire

This is a little preview and I'm wondering if I should post the whole one which is still in progress. The cover is still ehhhh.

I was a normal girl before I got sucked into the land of Prythia. I had close friends and even a guy who would've been my boyfriend. But it all changed the day I was brought into a fantastical and mystical land ruled by a terrifying demon king. The people of Prythia were divided but one thing kept them together. Me.

It's still effy but I wanted to see what you guys thought of the first part of the book