Taken
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Last published Sat, May 2, 2015
"I don't know how it does it. But for 13 minuted you're taken. And no one knows what will happen in those 13 minutes."
Brooke Hopper's life is messed up. She acts tough and bitchy, but really she just wants someone to help her. Inside she's imploding with anger and sadness.
It starts fairly simply, your eyes glaze, you're not quite with it. But suddenly your 13 minutes start, and in those 13 minutes you have no control. Someone or something is controlling you, and what you do in those 13 minutes is up to them. But after your time is up, it's always the same. You drop down dead.
But the next day, everyone forgets, only Brooke can remember. And over time, she thinks she's imagining it all. That is until someone turns up who can remember it too. And he looks like he's prepared to stop Brooke imploding.
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