The haunted city

A horror story
A boy who has lost his parent during hold-up in their house moved in a city named "Livend" where the only family of his was found.
Just after his arrival, he saw something strange, a girl that was committing suicide.
He wanted to stay out of any strange story so he chose to ignore what he saw.
But the next day, he in his new class, he saw the girl once again.
"She should be dead !" that what he thought.
Then he decided to discover what happened.

But what he discovered was far away from what he expected.

This is a story of mine, an horror story.

This is my first story so don't be too hard on me.