It's my First story so I thought I would give it a go and my spelling is really bad so sorry for spelling its might not be exiting or long but I will try my best for it to be exiting It's about a happy family who lives in a cottage in a big field they don't have a lot of money so they have to work hard and it's a strict life. One day when the oldest daughter has an argument with the mother is when her life gets turned upside down