Carmen
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Last published Wed, Sep 16, 2015
The story of a girl who wanted it all but then it all went down hill. You will find out about the life of a young girl named Carmen who walks the streets for money, lives in a downtown Hollywood apartment, and sings at night club's for a dollar an hour. Sad right? All she wanted was to make it big in Hollywood and live in luxury, but then she hit rock bottom, until she meets a man by the name of Jonathan who could make her dreams come true. Discover what happens next.
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