This story is a rough draft of my writing to see what you guys think. I've never try to write a story in my life but to see if you guys think I'm a good writer. My friend she told me that I'm a really good writer but I don't believe it so I'm going to see what you guys think. please give me any feedback or comments. I would love to hear from you guys to see what you think. Tell me if I should keep going or just stop because I'm terrible. I love you guys!All Rights Reserved