Alternate Universe Of Romeo and Juliet

Had to write this for English, thought it was decently good so I posted it here. It's only short, and I guess it's a one shot? I dunno.

What if the Montagues and Capulets weren't fighting, and Romeo and Juliet still fell in love? Blood will be spilled, tears will be cried and will Romeo and Juliet ever get their happily ever after?

The characters except the seer and the overall story belong to Shakespeare, the storyline, however belongs to me. Please give it a read and vote if you like it. Also please criticise the story, it would help my writing a lot.