Divine punishment
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MatureOngoing1h 22m
Last published Sun, Oct 16, 2022
In a world ruled by divinities, what can simple mortal do other then obey ?
Any sane human would never dream of defying the gods, no matter how unfair their decisions are.
So if a goddess chose your precious daughter to be apart of her experimental project, what choice do a mother have aside from handing her over ?
For in this world, the gods words are absolute.
Such are the words of the almighty Edrea, ruler of Evitya, the smallest part of this galaxy.
And if her majesty desire to start another war to take away her rival's territory, what could her people do aside from following right behind her ?
But what exactly happen when the sacrifices open their eyes to the cruel reality that their god never blessed them by choosing them, but instead cursed them to a future of suffering ? What exactly happen if for once, they try and defy the gods ? Would freedom follow ? Or would they be strike by a Divine Punishment ?
[Cover art is by @deadsophism on instagram ! ]
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