The tale of Lucien Austin B. Holloway (fiction)

this short fictional tale is a bout a cowboy who sets out on a journey to find himself and to avange his parents after they are killed by an outlaw, but is it really just about revenge?

Hi! I am small author who made this short story inspired by a game called red dead redemption. Some of the names such as (the lemoyne raiders, Blackwater, and Armadillo are from red dead Ect.) I hope you enjoy reading this story even if the writing isn't that good, feel free to critique my story and give me tips on how to be a better author, I also recommend another story I made called "The boy on the train", it is not a finished story but I hope you can wait for me to finish that project, but in the meantime you could read other stories that are much better than what I'm doing here if you want to wait, but that's all, thank you!