Particle
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Last published Tue, Nov 27, 2012
This is a novel about brotherly loyalty, love, and responsibility to correct your mistakes. Two brothers, sons of a rich and absent father, create a machine that will change the very fate of the world. When an old love returns it tests the power of their loyalty
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