untitled story (notebook)

ughhh I'm writing this again.
hello! it's been a while... aaand I forgot what I'm gonna say. right.

this is made purely to try and improve my writing and my fictional world's story. constructive criticism is appreciated, along with general feedback and jokey comments, because who am I to stop you?

this is my original world that exists purely in my own head. (unless..) since this began when I was in my cringe state of creation (not like I'm any better now, but that's why I'm here! to improve), expect there to be changes in the lore, characters, and story itself. I don't ever really have a plan, so expect some plot holes too.

hope you enjoy(?) :)