Down with the System! (On Hold)

Down with the System! (On Hold)

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The world we know is no more. It turned into a wasteland, cities are half sunken under sand. If you would ask the system the would say it was the fault of those who didn't live with the capital, the rebels they would say it is the fault of this called free System. They are called Freedom but if they really the freedom everyone seek is questionable. Some people are completely fine with the system those who are not just disappear without a trace or run away. The rebels are not many, but they follow people with superpowers. They got them from somewhere unknown. But the capital had their own powers. Fears were those called super soldiers. They are not human more like shadows who feed of fear of others. And how better to get fear then by torturing and killing rebels. This is a win and win situation for the system. There was one rebel who was known, young but strong. He was someone with a strong power. He could somehow control the fears and he was also able to turn to a shadow, he was a prophet. But at one attack at one from the buildings where they torture the rebels to gain fear, he disappeared. The other friends and comrades didn't know where he went or if he even was alive somehow, they all forgot him slowly, they only knew him but his name was forgotten. Then suddenly after a few years Freedom got stronger, they had suddenly a stronger army and one that was commanded by the one and only known rebel himself. What happened was the question everybody asked. The answers had only he and himself, he fought and won many times against the rebels. Soon many were captured and brought to this fear buildings. There were now many stories of this rebel, most of them told to their children has creepy stories or him has a traitor. Will the rebels be able to bring down the freedom system? How easy will it be for them, or how should they approach this mess?
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NOTICE: THIS STORY IS AN OLD DRAFT. It is currently in the process of being rewritten. For your sake (and mine) please go check out "ILLUSIONS AND LIES: REWRITE" on my profile. While I'm not stopping you from reading this- especially if you're impatient and want to know how the story goes- please do keep in mind that aspects of this story are unpolished in this book. "we thought we were special. turns out, we were wrong." A group of teenagers who live in a place known only as "The Compound" are led to believe that they are the last people on the planet, aside from their ever-present caretakers. The Caretakers study them and their abilities, never once letting them know of the thriving outside world. In the outside world, everybody has abilities, known as "Gifts." The oppressive government prevents people from using these Gifts properly. A faction of rebels is on the rise, determined to retrieve the children they lost to this cruel government and create a fairer world for all. "and we don't like being wrong..." Modern futuristic AU. This story will contain mature themes and triggering topics, such as somewhat detailed descriptions of blood and violence, suicide, depression, homophobia, child abuse, and death. I do not own the characters, but I do own the plot. Please do not steal the plot or elements of this story.

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