Roast and Chiffon Cake

Alice want's out. She wants to leave and never look back, but her husband Jack won't let that happen. Alice is getting desperate, though, and when she gets desperate she doesn't care who she has to hurt to get her way.

This story is somewhat based on the new movie Don't Worry Darling, but not really because I didn't read or watch anything about it until I was halfway done so bear with me. If you have any tips involving how to better my writing and story telling I'd be happy to hear it.