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Untrusted Love (Editing)

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allie love nick romance untrusted

Attention!!! : I wrote this story when I was thirteen. I'm in my twenties now. It was horribly written and I have yet found the time to go back and rewrite/edit. If you choose to read this, please know that I understand your frustration of how my writing style used to be. It flat out sucks. I agree with you. Believe me. With that being said, please do not hesitate to leave comments on the story in general.

When Nick is rejected by his biggest crush, Megan, he goes to the beach to surf. Not only does he let off some steam, but he meets another girl, Allie. He finds that she's not to quick to trust anyone though. When he starts to grow feelings for her, he forgets all about his previous crush and soon falls in love with her. But what happens when Megan finally decides that she actually does have feelings for Nick? Will Nick leave Allie of whom he's in love with dearly for his biggest crush, Megan, or will something else in his past try to tear them both apart?Все права защищены

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Now You Want Me?

(Warning! Cringey story I wrote when I was like 14!) He admitted to liking her, she did the same. Then they should be together right? Well that wouldn't make a story. Tyler and Megan have been friends for a few years and when Tyler finally confesses his feelings, so does Megan. But when Tylers ex-girlfriend Lilly wants to get back together , he asks Megan if they can just be friends. Megan being the nice girl she is accepts his friendship. But he toyed with her feelings. That's what gave her the idea, sure Megan wasn't perfect but she planned on making herself irresistible, then Tyler would regret rejecting her. And then there's Drake...

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