Untrusted Love (Editing)
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  • Reads 2,871
  • Votes 31
  • Parts 30
  • Time 3h 28m
Complete, First published Mar 17, 2012
Attention!!! : I wrote this story when I was thirteen. I'm in my twenties now. It was horribly written and I have yet found the time to go back and rewrite/edit. If you choose to read this, please know that I understand your frustration of how my writing style used to be. It flat out sucks. I agree with you. Believe me. With that being said, please do not hesitate to leave comments on the story in general.

When Nick is rejected by his biggest crush, Megan, he goes to the beach to surf. Not only does he let off some steam, but he meets another girl, Allie. He finds that she's not to quick to trust anyone though. When he starts to grow feelings for her, he forgets all about his previous crush and soon falls in love with her. But what happens when Megan finally decides that she actually does have feelings for Nick? Will Nick leave Allie of whom he's in love with dearly for his biggest crush, Megan, or will something else in his past try to tear them both apart?
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