Alyssa Vernal and The Lost Treasure: Everything Wrong
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Before you ask what's this for, it's just a rant book about my old book series that I stopped writing a year ago. Yes, I HAD the guts to make a rant book about it, because honestly I'm really mad at my past self for messing this up when I could've written an awesome book series, with relatable and realistically written characters.
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So, this book will just state everything wrong with Alyssa Vernal, and some ideas for the future, in case I make a rewrite of these books. I hope this book will keep you interested and will give you more ideas for a story you're writing.
P.S, the ideas might change soon, because that's just how my mind works.
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