This is the rewrite of "the broken stone" those of you who enjoyed it despite its errors, I thank you for your ability to understand my vomit, I loved this tale as much as you did but cleaning it the way it was would have been to much of a hassle, so I give you Unbroken the same tale with clearer backstory and better gramer, just do remember I'm from southern Oklahoma, so my gramer may not be like yours.
what you still here for go read the story.
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super unedited!
i wrote this when i was so so young, and i hope to one day have the energy to go back and fix all my mistakes.
(just because i'm now a communications major and it bothers me)