I Become Karna With Million Times Crit System In Mahabharta.
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  • Reads 77,898
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  • Parts 51
  • Time 7h 24m
Ongoing, First published Oct 10, 2022
(This story take place in different timeline and universe)


This is the story about boy named Karan getting recarnatated in the time of Mahabhrata. Biggest war at that time.


What will happen if he become karna in it?

What will happened if as a boon he ask System? 

What will happen if he get to meet those characters? Is he able to chnage their destiny or it will turn worse?


Let's find out what will happen when he born into age of God's. Do he able to achieve what he wanted to or something else's. 



(Note: I find that there is no mahabhart time novel with system. So I decided that take that task on myself and introduce system in the age of God's.)


Disclaimer: Remember this is fanfiction of Mahabhrata. Not "Orignal" Mahabhrata. I have no intention to harm anyone's religious belief, I am just writing what if story in my perspective. If you don't like it, So i kindly request you not read any further, and if you do take it with a pinch of salt.

Also in the end there will be world travel after all I am going to make Karna too OP, So he had to find a different world.
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