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Commander

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Reads 81
Votes 14
Parts 15
Time 1h 7m

2050 adventure asian commander dystopia england family fiction government high-school highschool lovestory plottwist rebel sadie sadieandtheo sadiemorrison school science-fantasy teenagers teens theo

If you're looking for a cliche teen book with a touch of romance, a dash of dystopia, and a whole lot of badass, this might be the book for you.


 In a world where, on the night of someone's 16th birthday, the Commander visit you in the form of a vision, where three doors are presented to you. You must choose a door that will set your future.
One day, Sadie Morrison, your typical, shy, nerdy, bullied girl, rebels and tells the Commander to choose.
What she finds will change her life forever...
Will she be able to ever get back to normal?
Or will her impulsive decision cause her to forever live someone else's life?

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2050 adventure asian commander dystopia england family fiction government high-school highschool lovestory plottwist rebel sadie sadieandtheo sadiemorrison school science-fantasy teenagers teens theo

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Unlocking The Secrets Of Secret Agent cover

Escaping Elysia cover

The Fighter cover

After Hours cover

Don't Look Down - Book #1 cover

Post Plague Kidnapping - Published! cover

Darker Than Black cover

Unlocking The Secrets Of Secret Agent

Kandis Miller (18 yrs old) a strong and a very intelligent girl who knows to handle guns and protect herself in any situation,her parents used to be secret agent but died in a car accident. She is not only strong physically but she has a sharp mind and no- one can win through her sarcasm, she attends Hamilton prep, Washington DC'S most prestigious High school where everyone is related to someone in power but not her. She is a outcast in her school but no-one could ever Bully her, she used to be alone and never thought of making friends. One day when 2 unexpected students transferred to her school and her role as social outcast changes. As Kandis unlocks some truth, she comes in front of some challenges and find herself in dangerous situation Callen Keller is 22 yrs old used to be in military school and from their he got the opportunity to protect President's illegitimate son Finn Wilson (18 yrs old) . They both met kandis in high school and let's see how they find their way to truth and will they find their love ? Will their friendship last forever? **** All characters and events of the story are fictious which has no relation with real life . ©All rights reserved 🚫 I do not allow my work to be used in any way without my permission 🚫 ⚠️ Plagiarism is crime