A Love Carved In Time
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A RadhaKrishn Retelling
We are all familiar with the five thousand-year-old love story of the greatest lovers of the ages, RadhaKrishna.
This is my take on what would be their story like in today's world.
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Radha has witnessed her fair share of loss throughout her life. Her once big happy family has been reduced to a small one which has been ruined by grief and loss and while she has managed to remain her happy self, she yearns for something her family might have forgotten to express to her, love.
Now someone has appeared in her life seemingly out of nowhere. He's there at every turn of her life, and suddenly she can't escape him. Each interaction leaves her more and more confused and annoyed. He feels too familiar to be a stranger, yet too strange to be understood by her. While his presence hints at a connection so deeply entwined, her practical mind rejects all possible explanations.
Watch this sweet love story unfold, peek inside to witness this retelling of the greatest love saga.
~DISCLAIMER~
This story is loosely based on the Star Bharat show Radhakrishn, but I would change most of it to fit my setting.
I am writing this because of my love for them and I would appreciate it if you forgive any mistakes or inaccuracies in the story.
Hate will not be appreciated or tolerated.
(first 6 chapters are to be edited, please excuse the horrible writing and read past them for highly improved writing skills)
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