This is an actual book I'm writing and I need feedback on it. Here is a short description of it: The main character, Ella, is a 12-year-old girl living with her father, Eren. She lives in a small village with meadows filled with flowers, beautiful lakes, and many other things. Ella is just a normal girl. Or so she thought. When she turned 13 she found out that she was the only living relative of the queen, meaning she would rule over the land. Shocked and in disbelief, Ella begins to rule over the village. Soon she meets Willow, Hazle, Ethan, and Oliver! But her best friend, Aidan, is not so happy about all of this.
There you have it! The full description of my book. I need feedback! Feel free to use constructive criticism. And that's all from me! Enjoy reading my book.