Rebecca's Last Dare

Rebecca gets dared at a sleepover with her friends to discover the new boy's secrets. She is hesitant, but doesn't want to be known as a chicken for her whole life, so she agrees. However, things start to seem off the moment she arrives at the house. Will it all go sideways or turn out okay?

I am open to critique and different ways of writing, as I am looking to improve. Any advice or suggestions of different phrasing will be greatly appreciated.

Cover made by my good friend Mamie, credit to them.