Enigma: The Rise of John Dale
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  • Reads 13
  • Votes 5
  • Parts 1
  • Time 8m
Ongoing, First published Oct 30, 2022
Mature
Prequel to Enigma: Niccolo's arch

(This story will not go up to Niccolo' arch. John Dale has a resurrection arch which is before Niccolo's Arch)

John Dale is a 17 year old boy who was a late bloomer proving to have immense power. Being gifted of absolute mind control and telepathy (nearly infinite range) soon proved to be a curse and his ultimate downfall.  As a kid, John Dale dreamed of breaking free of his fathers mind control. Doing that meant becoming stronger. Becoming stronger meant abiding by his father's commands and killing millions of innocent people. One day, John Dale is sent on a mission to cause wreck havoc on the Kovalevsky family, rulers of an unranked utopian empire, Kovenko. 

Discovering his mother is the queen, John Dale takes the opportunity to get closer to the family due to his mother's trauma for never being there for him as a kid. Shit goes down and John dale switched sides, but not until after he killed their son and his own father. A spiteful Cohen, the king, along with their two remaining children, refuses to accept John Dale into the family. 

John Dale works to prove his place in the family all while trying to overcome his crippling trauma and PTSD. After lots of hard work he becomes best friends with his sister and forms an unbreakable bond with Cohen, who officially adopts him as one of his own. 

John Dale and his sister, Jordan attend a prestigious academy where John Dale becomes best buds with the Prince of the third Empire. Little did they know, it would be the mark the of beginning of the biggest scandals of modern Royal History. Forming connections with the royals, John Dale begins to get recognized interdimensionally, increasing Kovenko's rank. 

Cohen hands down the thrown to John Dale. Little did they know John Dale would become the number one power of their universe leaving a legacy lasting for millions of years afterwards. 

"The end justify the means"
- Niccolo Machiavelli
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