Critiques - WattPad Reviews by David McIntosh

I hope to write a number of critiques of books I find on WattPad. I found a critiquing club recently, and became inspired. My first critique went well, much better than all those book reports from high school. I promise to try my best never to compare and contrast! Oh damn, now that I've said it I keep thinking of where I might use c&c.

I will leave a link to the book critiqued in a comment at the end of the page. I'll also dedicate each critique to the author reviewed. In this way my readers should be able to find a link to the story, if they are inspired to go there.

* Thanks to @Black_Lilly for the cover art!