You Deserve Better(Editing2017)

You Deserve Better(Editing2017)

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Parts 9

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Last published Thu, Sep 10, 2015

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Renae Jones is a young 21 year old living with her 23 year old boyfriend Jay. She is being abused and mistreated by Jay. Can her only best friend, August, save her?

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