Unfortunate lover (GXG)

Ashley Alvarez 23, formally known as Ashley Sullivan, Ashley grew up with the best childhood any child could ever ask for with her siblings, it all went wrong after her father got a mob boss really mad and they ended up killing her mother and older brother when she was just 17. Her father went into a spiral and started treating her an her sister really badly. He sold her off to the nastiest criminal and kept her sister to do his dirty work. But the Mafia leader of the second largest mafia saw the way the bastard was treating her and decided to take her an adopt her as her own.

She couldn't do anything to get her sister out, but her sister decided to run away from their father to find her. The mafia boss also took her in when she arrived

Kai Santiago 26, Kai enjoyed her life with her baby girl and girlfriend at her mansion up on the hills, she did no wrong to nobody she wasn't even apart of her mothers Mafia because she wanted to live a normal life with the little family she had, she knew at some point she would have to take over from her mother but she didn't really care as long as her family is safe, but the last name she had tied her to her mothers mafia and the smaller mafia groups thought that getting to her would leave a good message to her mother.

All off them failed miserably to get to Kai because she have cameras everywhere, Kai took them all out with the help of her most trusted bodyguards, but Sullivan's men got in somehow an took her whole life when they did.

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