Canis Lupus

This is my first time writing for an audience, critique is welcome and wanted. I tend not to plan stuff out, i'm sorry if the story takes a random turn making it worse than it already is. But so far the stories basic plot is something along the lines of normal kid meets boy, boy has brother, brother REALLY likes normal kid. There will be gore, I hope its as descriptive as it is in my head. It is quite possible for the story to end up being rated as mature for extreme violence or explicit sex.