Into the dark

This is a story based off a short story I made for english. I wanted to improve it and get feed back! Maybe if enough people see the updated version than I might send the og story on the app but for now just enjoy this story about a teenager named brook. Also currently don't have a story cover! So anyone who makes any one just tag me on insta! My insta is @i'm_a_vinegar_demon. TY<3