DRAFT
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This is the draft of a story i began maybe two years ago
i wanted to put it out there for feedback and maybe to see if its worth continuing/rewriting
The first chapter i'm putting out is based an apocalyptic world. 3 friends who are in the woods (probably looking for food), when they see a group of hunters get attacked by a "malidione tiger".
They try to leave but accidentally catch the hunters attention and one of them comes after the friend's.
leave as many comments as you want! i always take feedback to heart - and take comfort in knowing that my writing has improved much since i wrote this.
it is in first person, but if i do rewrite it it'd probably end up in third, but i'm not sure.
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