Whispering Souls Pt.2

Whispering Souls Pt.2

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Ongoing<5 mins

Last published Sat, Feb 14, 2015

The song started, Hunter let out a sick drum solo lead by the guitar and bass, people were amazed on how good they were for a couple teens. People started dancing around a little bit and bobbing their heads, "These kids are good, don't ya think?" Said the man in the black suit. "Yes they are" Said his buddy in the gray suit. "After this wanna give these kids a talk and see if they wanna get big?", "Yes we should". After the song was over, Jimmie raised his arms and did the rocker sign with his hands and whooped. The audience started clapping and cheering for them. After they put their equipment away, they all said good job to each other and did a group high-five. As they were walking out, the two men in suits called for them, "Hey kids, have you ever thought of becoming big with those instruments?" said the man in the black suit. Jimmie quickly spoke up and said "Well that's what we were aiming for!". "Well you're in luck, because we were looking for a couple of newbies to hit the studio and make music ." Jimmie looked at the others "You guys in?", "HELL YEAH!!" said Hunter and Jordan at the same time. "Well here's our card so you can give us a call when you're ready." said the man in the gray suit. Jimmie took the card out of his hand and put it in his pocket, "Thanks dude, see you two in a few weeks!". The two men left, The teens left and each went home after that long day. Jimmie lied down on his bed ans pulled the card out of his pocket and stared at it. "F*ck yeah" he whispered to himself. He put the card on his nightstand and fell asleep. -Wait for part 3!! :) Hope y'all like it

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