The Elementals
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A short story around 8 or 9 pages I wrote for a school assignment when I was 12. If you like fiction and magic, I hope you'll like 'The Elementals'! Thank you all so much for reading this!
P.S. (Many years later now) I wish my younger self had picked a less generic title... Anyways, I just popped in to say that there are some mechanical errors but overall it's pretty good. Text that had been in a different font or italicized in Google Docs (to distinguish writing, texts, etc.) didn't transfer when copying over, and there are places in dialogue that should have had commas instead of periods, but other than that it's not bad.
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