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I'm Sorry... (Prolog)

I'm Sorry... (Prolog)

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"I'm sorry I'm not there yet, I'm almost there the hospital is less than half a mile away"John. "Okay just hurry" Sam. *** (What's that buzzing, I'm just nervous, just keep driving you need to get to the hospital) "hospital in 1/4 of a mile thank god" "I can be there and make it". *** John pulled into the parking lot of the hospital. Rushing into the door to his wife having his child. He was on time... "Is it a boy or girl"John said with amazement. "It's a girl"the doctor said. "Can we name her Sophia" Sam said to John tiredly. "Sophia is a beautiful name" John said happily. *** John and Sam arrived at their new home A new home for the new family... *** (Later that night) "Sam you rest I'll put the baby to sleep"John whispered. *** John laid the baby down in her cradle and rocked her to sleep. Before he left the room he turned on the baby monitor. *** (John went to sleep) (Kill them their evil kill them now you have no choice) "John what's wrong...John No plz" *** "What have I...
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INTRODUCTION: Missing person reports were just piling up one after another these days. But none of the victims were found alive. After the killer got what he wanted from victim's family, the next day person would be found dead. People are starting to move out from the city. It's gotten worse as hours passed. Phones are ringing at the police stations and 911 calls are getting more and more desperate. Not many things were found out about this town's killer. But, the way people are describing him- yes him- shows that they all see him as an old man called the Gentleman. He got this name from the way he puts his deceased victims bodies. Lying on their back, carefully placed, hair brushed and clean, face without any makeup, but covered with black veil, white nightie with small bouquet in their arms that are placed on their chest. Beautifully horrific sight if you ask me. They all appeared to be women in their early or mid 20s, brunettes with blue eyes, skinny and average height. The Gentleman is described as someone in his late 30s or early 40s, is into art, but mostly sculptures as he shows by placing his victims in recognizable positions. On most of dead women's necks could be seen small tattoos that were assotiated with life and death- butterfly with its wings painted like skull. That was all that we knew of the Gentleman until something happened few days ago...

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