Captivating // Ben Orr
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Last published Tue, Dec 5, 2023
a young girl finds herself lured in by nontheless, Ben Orr.
Ben orr, a name that just easily rolls off anyone's tongue; but there was only one of this one in question, most guys wish they had what he did, the looks, the strong musical ability, and the talent to make any girl easily get lured in just by, well, almost nothing. He can't help it, he was just born with that.
and one night, a young, timid, girl found herself unable to keep her eyes off the man with dark hair and piercing green-blue eyes
It was fall of 1980 and you could hardly wait to attend the show later, you've been waiting for what almost felt like forever for this night and now it's finally here; although you had no idea it was also going to be a night you weren't gonna forget.
Author's note: i feel like this was a short prologue but i kinda summed a good amount into how short it is 🥴🤷♀️
hope you all enjoyy ;)
-Author's note-
so my last story was kinda a flop, I really hope this one will be better because I didn't have much experience with writing fanfiction 🥴 but without further ado, let's continue ;)
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