Trouble in Hawaii

Joshua is falsely accused and arrested in Hawaii for two deaths he knew nothing about, follow the adventure of his friends to find out what really happened within the short period of time they had in Hawaii.

It's a really short but meaningful story, my second actual complete story like ever, apart from like essays and stuff.

I would really appreciate if you read and left positive comment or constructive criticism to help me get better.

Read, vote, comment, all of that and hopefully you like it enough to share with your friends and/or family.