First Mistake
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Last published Sat, May 16, 2015
Tanner is your typical teenager with that bad boy reputation. With one glance at him you would think, 'he's got it all together.' He himself even thinks this to be true, but then tragedy strikes.
It was just a Friday, just a drive, just a drink and then nothing turns right. It all turns out to be his first mistake and now there's no turning back.
Maybe living in between life and death could teach Tanner something, or maybe it will just destroy him more.
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