Falling Through
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Ongoing, First published Feb 19, 2015
This is a poem(or a song, depending on your P.O.V), not a continuing story.

Well, this is not something I normally do but I decided to attempt a sloppy poem to help vent anger, frustration, and stress in general. The only reason I'm posting this for others is to see if some one could help me fine-tune/improve this

Any feedback would be super helpful please!
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My Poetry

168 parts Ongoing

Most of this is sad, any TW will be at the start of them I'm a 17 y/o just wanting to share some of my poetry with people other than my friends :] (Also feel free to comment any tips and how I could improve on my writing!)