Minute Killing
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I felt the need to challenge myself and write a crime story in english, which is not my first language.
This story will put you into a detective's mind, in his search for a serial killer while he faces demons from the past. However, a toxic environment with dangerous people can get on his way, creating a hard time. Will you help on his journey or become allies in others games?
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