Fall Through
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Ongoing, First published Jan 19, 2023
"She was logical... he was myth..."


Suzy O'connel is an A+ student at Beaver Dam College and she's very, very logical. She moved away from home at a young age desperate to get the best schooling and separating herself from the rest of her family.
After the O'connel parents' death, Suzy vows never to return to her siblings. The memories would be too much.
On an angry walk to escape reality, she falls through the ground and comes face to face with handsome Prince Casper. She refuses to believe it, even though the whole world seems incredibly real. 
She demands to be shown the exit; after all, she's getting married to Ricardo Cain in just two weeks and must plan!
The problem is- once you get in no one knows how to get out.
Casper was born there, he has never seen the world above- no one has. Not in this generation.
But, Casper sees how distraught Suzy is and becomes determined to help the beautiful girl get out.
Can the two find their way?
What will Suzy do with the unassumingly charming Eugene Scrubbs' flattering attention? 
Will Suzy fall for Casper? Does she still adore Ricardo as much as she did before?
Will Casper be willing to give up the life he knows to join Suzy in her world if he must?
Can Suzy fix her relationship with her family?

Or, will the whole thing... Fall Through?





"Don't overwork yourself Su, I worry for your health. When was the last time you saw your family?"
They stopped at the carriage. The horses snorted and scuffed their hooves on the stone. When was the last time she'd seen her family? Her mind wandered back in time, "Well, I've sent them letters-"
"Seen them, Su. Seen them. Not written to them." Ricardo looked deeply into her striking eyes.
Suzy shifted uncomfortably and she struggled to find any words, "I haven't seen them in two years." She confessed. 
It had been since Christmas two years ago.
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