Utopia
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Ongoing12m
Last published Fri, Feb 20, 2015
This is a project that I have been working on. I only have the first chapter but I thought feedback would be good before I decided to continue. It's very short but I think that it has potential.
Bree Thomas has always been a curious soul. She is restricted by what she is allowed to know and learn, but when she turns eighteen she decides that it's time for her to take matters into her own hands. By defying the government and breaking all the rules she finds that their is a whole world of possibilities that she had been cut off from.
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