Don't Miss The Train: Eleven 12
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Ongoing, First published Jan 27, 2023
An unnamed passenger found their self stuck in a cycle where a train comes by every 11:11 o'clock, and every time the train stops a second to wait for them to hop in, without fail, they manage to miss the train for five years straight.

This micro story contains a lot of elements, such as; the door of opportunity, a pool of self-doubts, peer pressure and 'time' depicted as an unceasing running train. All of these compacted into almost seven hundred words in a single-paged book. One may consider this a poem rather than a story, but I consider it as both. 

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Most of this is sad, any TW will be at the start of them I'm a 17 y/o (Started this when I was 15) just wanting to share some of my poetry with people other than my friends :] (Also feel free to comment any tips and how I could improve on my writing!)