Hindrance.
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• Hindrance - a thing that provides resistance, delay, or obstruction to something or someone.
Characters -
Protagonist ✓
~ Max Marrow
Antagonist ✓
~ Amy Medbay
Characters who carry the story ✓
~ Malcon Pecker
~ Jasmine Medbay
Side characters (still in development) ✓
~ Maya Marrow
~ Barron Marrow
'~ ° Story '~•
With obsession, comes rejection. Though, rejection should be handled reasonably, not ending up commiting something you shouldn't have.
Max just started dating his childhood friend who he loves dearly, but things started going down the horror road.
From finding out how his obsessed friend falls for him to making a deal with the devil which ended up pretty badly.
How can he fulfill the deal he made with something that is beyond powerful?
'Remember, you get three days. Three days to tell your love what happened.'
'...and if not...?'
'...something bad will happen, and you know how I like to do it...'
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