El Comienzo Trágico (The Tragic Start) | [Still on Going]
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  • Parts 20
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Ongoing, First published Feb 04, 2023
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It is a novel set in the 1600s, about a country that was ruled and colonized by the Witch Queen. However, there is a group of young people who are affected by the wickedness and brutal doings of the Queen, and their society that is ruled by the followers of this queen, and these teenagers are planning to take this Queen down. But first, they have to get through a lot of journeys, to gain strength and power and learn something from it. They then meet a sorceress who tells them what they need to defeat the enemies. So they went on many adventures and journeys to collect those objects. However, it is not that easy, because they have to face many obstacles that will stop them from getting what they want.
      Witness the story and life struggles of each character, how they got into this situation, and how they can escape this circumstance.
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Monsters Are Created By Other Monsters. Sou & Isabelle, A set of eccentric and unhinged twins with erratic elemental powers has to set aside their differences, control their evergrowing power and win a war in order to protect the only place they call home their academy and other gifted people from being hunted by the beast. - What you're about to read doesn't matter because a sinister force lurks beyond the great graveyard that protects the institution of, for and by the gifted! The first thing you need to understand about this story is it stems from a place of really deep mistrust and an unforgivable betrayal. That's an angry theme. But that all of that changes when we realise there's a lot more to this ever-expanding story! If there are Witches in this universe then obviously there are Witch hunters to just finish them off. There's a rich history or a back story where almost 20 years ago the hunters gathered and removed all existence of witches with elemental magic (Controlling Earth, Fire, Water, Air & Spirit ) but only two survived. That's when the book jumps in to follow the path of those survivors. Um, there are factions of offensive(Elementals) and defensive covens(Guardians) and then there's the elements of epic love, love that consumes the people involved and of course what's love without a little danger. - Thank you so much if you've read this far. I deeply urge you to binge read the book and decide for yourself whether it's unputdownable or not. Thank you so much by the way dear reader. By reading this book you are supporting a plus-sized lgbtqiaap+ community model/writer who has seen nothing but struggle and blatant discrimination everywhere.

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