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I wrote Miss Jackson when I was 16 and I had just begun my journey as a writer. It gained some traction and I got a lot of praise for it. 
Now I'm 24 and I've grown so much since then, rereading it for myself I cringe at the plot and dialogue I used when I was a kid. 
So as much as I love the original for being my jumping off point I wanted to rewrite it, using everything I've learned over the last 7 years and hope that the people that read the original might want to reread it or people that have just found it may enjoy it more than the original if they happened upon it. 
This is the first 10 chapters. 

The plot: Brendan Ulrich is a 27 year old teaching assistant at UCLA who's head over heels for a student, Delilah Jackson. She also happens to feel the same. After some back and forth they come together and fall in love. Parents, teachers and other students get in their way as they try to navigate this new relationship all while hiding it from the school.All Rights Reserved

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To Andrew, with love by PresidentoftheWorld

WARNING: This book was written when I was a lot younger. It is the most embarrassing thing I have ever done, and many times I have considered deleting it. The only reason I haven't is because people still read it, and seem to like it *cringe*. You have been warned. "Seriously Mara, do you really just love to make accidental physical contact with me? I genuinely thought that you weren't like the other girls..." He teased playfully. I shook my head shyly and took a good look at him. Was this really my teacher? There he stood, in casual jeans and a shirt, with the dim corridor lights bringing out hidden undertones in his ruffled ash-blond hair. His eyes, reflecting the yellowy light, showed a green blend... huh. Okay, I didn't think I could deny it any longer - I had one hot biochemistry teacher. Something about the way I was looking at him must have been inappropriate because he seemed taken aback and began fidgeting nervously, chuckling at the same time. He quickly walked into his classroom and grabbed a big bag. "Okay, let's go." he said whilst thrusting the heavy-looking bag on to his shoulder. I blinked twice. "umm where?" I asked. ________________________________ When Mara Tanner loses her memory in a tragic incident, she forgets who she is - or the fact that she was once in love with her teacher, Andrew Roberto. All she now knows is that this new man 'Jacob Knight' is the one to help her, the one she should trust... And he is the one that wants Andrew dead.

Forbidden Human Mate by ectopiic

It is said that only the special humans get werewolf mates. Human mates aren't usually frowned upon in most packs, but as for The Larken Moon pack it's forbidden to claim and accept a human mate. Its been this way for centuries. ---------------- "Something was pulling me toward the cafeteria. Lord knows that I always avoided that place because I hated being around a lot of people at school. Reluctantly I entered the cafeteria. I didn't have any reason to go other than my sudden need to be there, so I just stood by the door. I stood there for about 5 minutes before I realized how stupid I was being. As I turned and walked toward the door I bumped into a guy. "Oh sor-" He started to say before he looked into my eyes and I swear I saw his eyes get a darker shade of his original brown "No it's ok, it was my bad." I said before he scoffed and walked past me. Usually I wouldn't have given a shit but to be honest when he did that I got a pain in my chest that caused me to jerk forward."

I'm Mated to a Stalker? by Xaraphena

A/N: So I've read over this story and realize how bad it truly sucks. I was going to edit and revise it and just delete the old chapters, but I would be pretty much rewriting the book so I'm going to worry about this later after I have some more recent stuff up. I hope any Mated To A Stalker fans can be patient for me. Love you all.

WORK IN PROGRESS: Betrayed Mate, a novel-ish by imaginationgirl35

I lied. It was a mistake. Now my mate hates me. Can I blame him? For readers: *I will update as I please. Don't be rude about it. Thank you. *I do my best to proofread before publishing, but some typos and errors will slip through. Feel free to point them out! *Comments, active engagement, and helpful critiques are welcomed. *Mean, unnecessary comments that attack me, personally, or other commenters will be ignored and deleted. *I'm not a spicey writer. I rather use my word count for plot, character development, and GROVEL!!! *Most importantly, I hope you enjoy the little world I'm creating.

Discontinued!The Queen Of The Sea And The Dead {Nico x Reader} by PetitMarshmallow

This is a remake of all the stories I've made of Nico x Reader. It'll mostly be from the reader's point of view. Also it's not going to be love at first sight because I want to make it so the reader realizes she loves Nico when it becomes a life or death situation and the same with Nico. Also I'm going to make sure this makes more sense than the other ones I've made since they were pretty much all over the place. If I have any writing errors please tell me so I can fix it.

Be Mine | EDIT | Justin Bieber by iamnotlois

••• EDITED STORY ••• The original was posted back in 2013 and I felt the need to rewrite the story since it's kinda cringe to be honest and I have matured a lot and my writing has gotten better as well since then so I wanna show this story from another (hopefully better) perspective. I feel like I didn't get into detail in some situations and didn't explain things that actually made sense and cut it off too quickly so I just want to take a chance to do this differently now to see how the story will turn out. It is one of my favorites and I want to make it as amazing as I can. Nothing about the plot will change, the number of the chapters will be a lot smaller because I will be putting some chapters together (because 1K words really ain't it for a good chapter lol), I will probably just add a few things then and there, make the chapters longer and more enjoyable to read but some of the dialogues and situations will literally stay the same. So if you're new and haven't read the old version WELCOME ♥️ and if you have already read, I'm very glad to see you again. I hope y'all enjoy reading, just as much as I enjoyed writing it. Much Love ‪♡ • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • Julie Marie Gray and her mother moved to Beverly Hills to start a new life after what happened in their past. Julie visits the Beverly Hills High School and finds new friends including Justin. Justin is the most famous and hottest boy at school. He is also a player. What will happen when they meet? Will they be just friends or will their relationship evolve to something more than that? Read to find out.

Into the Velvet by help-me-think-of-one

*EDITORS' CHOICE 2021*After falling for her senior year teacher, Louise learns a harsh lesson on what adulthood isn't. Louise has some trauma to unpack. Heartbreak's a bitch, and her first relationship had been anything but normal. Thinking herself mature for her age, her affair with Mr. Cain started swooningly well. Except things ended quite abruptly. It's a lot for a seventeen year old to handle. But who's really at fault for what happened? Who even is Mr. Cain, and what is he hiding? From the wreckage of her naivety and self-esteem, can Louise save her friendships and rebuild herself? Our love songs aren't telling the whole truth. How can this be? In this tale of vulnerability, adolescence and painful reckoning, the arrogance of youth demands a price. * "'You're what, Louise?' he asked. 'You're sorry? What am I supposed to do here? How can I turn this around? How can I tell you that everything you want and feel is reciprocated, when I have to go back to work and pretend none of it happened?' 'I don't know the answer!' I cried. 'Neither of us do.' I threw my hands up in defeat. He caught them before they could fall. 'But how do I go back to living without your words?' His voice became a whisper. He squeezed my fingers tightly, closing his eyes and bringing them to his chest. 'I need how you make me feel, Luiza. I need it to feel alive. I won't stay away. No one's made me feel this good before. And I can't stand myself for wanting what I want. What do I do?' I was a violin bow on the verge of splintering. Every inch of me pulsed with an ache that began from the marrow of my bones. Fate had brought us here. At this crossroads of ours, there were a hundred different choices to make. A thousand different lifetimes to choose from, stemming from and decided entirely by my next choice. And in the end, I chose incorrectly. I held his face between my hands, feeling the echoing pulse of his skin. I brought his face to mine. I kissed him."

Payment by Pocahontas_41

THIS BOOK IS NOW UNDER CONSTRUCTION! WARNING: THIS BOOK IS FOR MATURE READERS ONLY, DUE TO STRONG SEXUAL CONTENT AND LANGUAGE AND SOME SEXUAL VALANCE. MUST BE 18 OR OLDER TO READ. (This story contains bad grammar and and a lot of misspelled words if you can't read without being rude then don't read at all. I expect help but not rudeness. I do have a life outside of writing and I am working on other stories as will. I will get around to edit this story one day just be patient with me.) Update I have updated the first 4 chapters. will continue to do update throughout the year. It might take me a little while but I'll get there. Thank you all for reading and voting. Update: At the end of this month or maybe even before I am going be taken Payment completely down for the newer version to get started. It has taken me a while but I am happy with this new version where it still has some minor problems like spelling and grammar I did change scenes and added some to the existing ones. I haven't decided yet but there might be fewer parts. SO with that said be on the lookout for Payment to be removed. Sixteen-year-old Andi McGee is your average teenage girl. She is just like every other teen at least that is what she thinks, until she starts to babysat for one of her classmates. Jacob Kid is Mr. Popular at school, but his popular friends don't know about his secret life. The life he lives outside of school. The life he has with his two-year-old little girl. Finding a babysitter is hard, and when he finally finds one he has to be careful. Careful not to get on her bad side, she might just tell his little secret. When Jacob comes to Andi because he can't afford to pay her the price she has set, he offers her a deal that no other girl would resist from him. Will Andi take the deal or walk away, will she reveal his little secret or become a part of it?

"I've been waiting for this for so long " (William Afton x Y/N) by InTheAsylym-

(Not finished, never will finish it. Funny to say, I wrote this back in my first year of high school for, honestly, shits and giggle but it blew up???? Idk... but I kinda just lost the original plot so it's all over the place, grammar doesn't make sense, nothing in this fucking book makes sense. So my apologies for the dear people whom have read this. I apologize for it being the way it is and how my mind just simply fucked it all up. I thought I could personally make my way up to the top and be so damn happy with it, yet looking back at my 14/15 year old self, it simply was a rich feeling that I was on top; to be honest, I felt like I was best out of all. Looking back and maturing A LOT, I don't feel or think that way. I understand we all have different writing skills or grammar; but that is simply just not in my case. I wrote this out of being greedy and thinking I simply wanted everyone to like it but turns out; even the painter hates its awful paintings. So you may read it if you would like, or don't. Just... idk, thinking about simply deleting it.) [But what I wanted to say is sorry. Sorry for breaking the many promises and wishes of the book to even made it this far.. younger me would have made it true yet knowing the older me wouldn't have.] (Y/N) had a one night-stand the night before her new job at Freddy's Pizzeria. Little does (Y/n) knows that guy she slept with is the co-owner of the Pizzeria. As she gets to kinda know this guy better, the more pain and suffering she goes though. Will (Y/n) stick around more? Will she leave him? (ALL PICTURES GOES TO THE ARTIST!!!) (CHARACTERS GO TO OWNERS!!) (ALL LYRICS GOES TO THE MUSIC ARTIST!!)

Some Roommate (Unedited 2011) by VictoriaAshleyAuthor

I wrote this story before I knew what I was even doing! This was written in 2011 and is unedited and sloppy. It's the first story I ever wrote. Maybe one day I'll be able to do an edit now that I know what I'm doing more. First step, moving out of my parent's house. Second step, finding a roommate. Kendra finally thought she was free. She's 21 and getting a place away from her parents. She never thought it was going to be this hard but when you end up with a sex-crazed roommate that doesn't know the meaning of quiet or privacy... things can get a little complicated. Especially when you run into half naked guys in your house always trying to hit on you.Things spin a little out of control when she finds out her boss is in love with her and she's afraid she might lose her job, her boyfriend starts blowing her off and she thinks she's starting to fall for one of these no good players.

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To Andrew, with love

WARNING: This book was written when I was a lot younger. It is the most embarrassing thing I have ever done, and many times I have considered deleting it. The only reason I haven't is because people still read it, and seem to like it cringe. You have been warned. "Seriously Mara, do you really just love to make accidental physical contact with me? I genuinely thought that you weren't like the other girls..." He teased playfully. I shook my head shyly and took a good look at him. Was this really my teacher? There he stood, in casual jeans and a shirt, with the dim corridor lights bringing out hidden undertones in his ruffled ash-blond hair. His eyes, reflecting the yellowy light, showed a green blend... huh. Okay, I didn't think I could deny it any longer - I had one hot biochemistry teacher. Something about the way I was looking at him must have been inappropriate because he seemed taken aback and began fidgeting nervously, chuckling at the same time. He quickly walked into his classroom and grabbed a big bag. "Okay, let's go." he said whilst thrusting the heavy-looking bag on to his shoulder. I blinked twice. "umm where?" I asked. ________________________________ When Mara Tanner loses her memory in a tragic incident, she forgets who she is - or the fact that she was once in love with her teacher, Andrew Roberto. All she now knows is that this new man 'Jacob Knight' is the one to help her, the one she should trust... And he is the one that wants Andrew dead.