WAITING FOR A OPEN DOOR
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Last published Sun, Feb 22, 2015
After 1000 years Princess Luna is ready to return to Ponyville. But she is scared as Luna believes her sister will still hate her for what Nightmare
Moon had done to Ponyville that terrible day. Come on Luna's journey as she reaches Equestia and discovers what what everypony really thinks of
Her. Will this information that Luna gets be from the ponies be positive or negative? But then one day when Luna's sister is attacked by King Sombra,
Discord Queen Chrysails and also Nightmare Moon but as Luna is trying to help a terrible mistake happens that changes Luna and Celetia's sister
Life forever.
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