My voice

This is an essay I wrote for a public speaking class. I never gave it in because I felt like I would be over sharing.
And yes it is an essay so it's not that long. It takes probably less than 10 minutes to read. I'm a slow reader.
I am planning on writing stories on this app I just haven't gotten to it yet. I wanted to know what you guys think about this.
About this essay: it's basically about why I stopped talking so much and how I became so quiet and stopped hanging out. I'm trying to regain my voice and I'm doing that with writing.
Anyways hope you guys enjoy it (if anyone reads it). Feel free to comment on EVERYTHING. Grammar or something that isn't clear.
Anyways, have a great night guys.