My name

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Aria Barlowe is a young adult just trying to get by. After their mother's recent passing they head back too their hometown. Not only do they have too deal with figuring out who they are when most people their age did this in high school, they have too deal with their concerned Aunt  and new neighbors who strike even newer feelings. Follow Aria on their journey of self discovery and acceptance (stereotypical I know).

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So I found an old story, not sure if I'll ever finish or remake it. The chapters are short and there's one that's not even finished. I would love critique though. (I like the plot so maybe I'll come back too it)  

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Looking through my old work I realized this was probably supposed too be called Citrus Feelings and I had Mc and ML planned out somewhat so I want everyone's opinions 
Do you like My Name or Citrus Feelings better for the title?
I think the MC's chosen name was going too be Sebastian how do you feel about that?(I don't think it suits them but  let me know your thoughts)All Rights Reserved

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