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Last published Fri, Mar 24, 2023
two sisters who have been adopted into a mafia family who will be meeting two guys who will change everything.
ongoing+under edit
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•English isn't my first language so there could be some spellings and/or grammatical mistakes (sorry for these)
•My friends and I came up with the story line and it's mostly written as a joke (not really a crack story but contains cringe scenes) @aosifhjjjj @judizz2 @livvvvvlllllyyy
•If you notice anything I could/should improve or change tell me so I can do better
•this story is completely fictional except for most of the characters
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